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The Night Raiders pg 1by ~DoubleU101

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Yes, you guys get to start the story with some poems; three in fact (along with the cliche explanation of the story in the next two pages). I don't think I'm that good poetry--this is probably the best and my most favorite of the three, even though I don't think it's super great--but I haven't seen anything like this for a prologue to a comic and thought it was a good idea.

Ignore the anatomy failage in the first three pages.

DO NOT EDIT, COPY OR RE-DISTRIBUTE FOR ANY REASON

~DawnFrost Mar 20, 2011 Student Digital Artist

Very interesting and intriguing beginning. The only thing I would do is switch the order slightly so that the time of days are in order. Like :

Day - brooding

Dusk - coming

Night - they get you

Dawn - for living another round.

Putting them in order like that would build the suspense up more I think and it also makes more logical sense.

Once more awesome opening, =] and now I venture forth on to read more pages

~DoubleU101 Mar 20, 2011 Hobbyist Digital Artist

I'm not the best at writing poems (at least I think so), so help is always welcomed. I never really put much thought into the order, and now that I look at the way you have it, it actually does make a lot of sense

Thanks!

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