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Beacon My name is Alice.

What happened to me is a bit vague, but I think that's mostly because everything happened too fast for me to get a complete grasp on all the events. I can feel a warm streak going down the side of my face, and a bit of a trickle there. When I put my hand up to my temple, I feel a strange spot, like a small part of me that should be there is missing. It doesn't hurt but I find it unnerving, so I do my best not to touch it. I think I died.

If I died… then is this the afterlife? It's horrible here. Dead quiet, and black as can be. I can't find my bearings. There's nothing here from what I can se

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Sorry if it's hard to read; I couldn't find a good color for the font that still somewhat coordinates with the page somewhat... any suggestions for color?

It's pretty much self-explanatory. A GreatClan is basically a subspecies and a Clan is made up of wolves from the same subspecies; the amount of wolves in one Clan can vary but is generally at the very least 100 wolves. Regular sized packs still exist but are seldom seen by the Clans.

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~thelunapower Feb 20, 2012 Hobbyist Digital Artist

wow O.O

~DawnFrost Mar 20, 2011 Student Digital Artist

Because the bottom paragraph is an explanation, not part of the poem, I would have it be in a simpler font. It would separate it from the poem and reiterate that it's an explanation/elaboration on what is happening in the poem. I might actually not even have it on this page. Let people wonder what went on. Its is obvious in the poem that some one with awesome powers came and helped defend them from the monsters with out the paragraph. BUT I WOULD still keep the paragraph some where. maybe on a page that is just dedicated to explaining the ancient wolf language and their history? Like a back page, some special content, but not actually a part of the comic. I don't know. but if you do keep it on this page i would give it a simpler font for the reasons listed above.

(Please don't take offense to my suggestions, because thats all they are. You can choose to follow or ignore them, either way is fine with me. I just noticed this comic in my inbox thought it look really awesome and kept seeing little things I might try to change to make it even more awesome and thought I should share. Unless I see anything really big I will stop for the duration of reading your comic until you tell you you'd like more suggestions

~DoubleU101 Mar 20, 2011 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Thanks so much for the critique, Dawn! I would never take offense to any suggestion coming from you, or anyone for that matter; I actually got really excited when I saw a comment with a big ol' paragraph and your name at the top XD I'll definetely consider your suggestions. And I just want you to know that it's a huge honor for me to know that you're reading my comic, so thanks again.

*AstralWolvine Jan 29, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

In the bottom paragraph is it suppose to say 'mosters' or 'monsters'?

~DoubleU101 Jan 29, 2011 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Oops! It's supposed to be "monsters" ^^"

Thanks for catching that; I'll fix it tomorrow

*AstralWolvine Jan 29, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

ok sorry sure. Hee Hee I love your comic by the way its way cute

~DoubleU101 Jan 30, 2011 Hobbyist Digital Artist

Thanks! I personally think there's way too many always-serious comics out there, and even though mine gets more like that later on, I there should be plenty of lols throughout the story XD

*AstralWolvine Jan 30, 2011 Hobbyist General Artist

He reminds me of something really cute.. kinda like dopey or something. It makes me all fuzzy inside till I realize I'm squeezing my dog -snort-

~DoubleU101 Jan 31, 2011 Hobbyist Digital Artist

lol; dogs can do that XD

~MOXANDNUNZA Dec 30, 2010 Student General Artist

can't wait for the next page

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