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January 15, 2011
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I'm not very happy how the bg came out in the last panel... the ground looks kinda weird and hardly has any perspective between the top of that rise and the mountains.... I guess the rest of the page is alright, though...

I tried making Raiho's neck fluff less--well--fluffy and a bit more thin an sort of scruffy like a yearling's. It shows best in the last panel, which he's actually pretty cute in despite the background XD but panel 3 is my favorite cuz I like his expression and got perspective pretty decent (by the way, he's supposed to be kind of shocked/worried there. I need to work on my front view expressions...).

And I'm somewhat confused how this little cricket knows so much... :iconhmmplz: kind of ironic isn't it? A little bug gives advice to a wolf... but it'll give the other wolves an lol when Raihogan tells them about it, poor kid XD

And if you were wondering, we'll be meeting the second main character in..... two or three pages depending on how I decided to set them up. So don't worry; you won't be seeing just orange/red fur and teal eyes for long ;)

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~nikicasp Jan 9, 2012
Hehe, cricket talk funny. :D
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~DoubleU101 Jan 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:XD:
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~Earthpatriot117 Jul 14, 2011
is it normal for a wolf to understand a bug in this story?
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~DoubleU101 Jul 15, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
They're using telepathy, which can be used with any animal, and isn't uncommon for everyone to use it. I know it's hard to tell verbal talk with the mind stuff; I'm trying to find a way to differentiate them to use later so it's easier to understand what the characters are using.
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~Earthpatriot117 Jul 17, 2011
why not use this " at the beginning and end of every telepathy sentence?
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~DoubleU101 Jul 17, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Perhaps.... I was also thinking of using a different shade of text also, like gray instead of black. Not sure as of right now; I haven't yet played around with different things I can do so it could change to something completely different. But thanks for the idea, even if I don't use it :)
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~Earthpatriot117 Jul 17, 2011
no prob, an your idea is actually better. other people do the same thing when representing thoughts. ^_^
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~MOXANDNUNZA Jan 22, 2011  Student General Artist
lol yay new page :D
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~DoubleU101 Jan 23, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:la: I'll try and get the next one out today if I can :)
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~MOXANDNUNZA Jan 23, 2011  Student General Artist
ok
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