The Night Raiders pg 5

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I'm not very happy how the bg came out in the last panel... the ground looks kinda weird and hardly has any perspective between the top of that rise and the mountains.... I guess the rest of the page is alright, though...

I tried making Raiho's neck fluff less--well--fluffy and a bit more thin an sort of scruffy like a yearling's. It shows best in the last panel, which he's actually pretty cute in despite the background XD but panel 3 is my favorite cuz I like his expression and got perspective pretty decent (by the way, he's supposed to be kind of shocked/worried there. I need to work on my front view expressions...).

And I'm somewhat confused how this little cricket knows so much... kind of ironic isn't it? A little bug gives advice to a wolf... but it'll give the other wolves an lol when Raihogan tells them about it, poor kid XD

And if you were wondering, we'll be meeting the second main character in..... two or three pages depending on how I decided to set them up. So don't worry; you won't be seeing just orange/red fur and teal eyes for long

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